Thread:Killer kev/@comment-26841005-20171003210248/@comment-4723271-20171106204321

Its looks really good. The only thing I want to address is the structuring. For S2, we generally space the paragraphs between each scene, for example in the summary you just wrote, "Alice left the room letting husband and daughter coping with the revelation." - would be the end of the first paragraph, and "After receiving a letter from the Black Hood at the Blue and Gold Editing, Betty showed part of the letter - the encrypted message - to her mother. " - would be the beginning of the second paragraph