Thread:Alpha.Kev/@comment-4723271-20171028223949/@comment-31054681-20180101142712

Hey Kev, I did notice that the timeline was too detailed. I've just been adding more and more irrelevant info as the season progresses lol. But I was planning on doing a thorough cleanup, but you saved me the time. However, I do have one suggestion in mind: I was thinking of changing the tense of the timeline to a historical present tense as a means of dramatising past events as if they were unfolding in real time. I think this technique is really fitting for a timeline as it places the reader at the scene.