Thread:Voidcloud92/@comment-4723271-20191114234803/@comment-4723271-20200127170429

The pagans will get their own page. I saw the additions to the witch page. I figured it could stay for now, until we got a page up just so that visitors would have some place to find info on the subject.

I figured they would. There was all that build up in Part 3, and yet still very little was revealed. Whatever Blackwood released, I'm sure he doesn't have peace in mind.

I saw that as well but didn't really have the time to read it. But it could definitely use a little revision to cap it down just a little. An in depth expansion of a character's personality is fine, but at a certain point, it becomes too much. I don't think any character needs 3-4 paragraphs. I'm sure once i read it, there's probably repeated info or irrelevant bits that can be revised.

I noticed. I had completely forgot that Nagaina was the name of one of Ambrose's familiars.