Thread:Bennett Blood Mage18/@comment-35135602-20181030020321/@comment-4723271-20181030023541

I'll take this since Bennett's only following up on my revisions.
 * Stop adding 'very beautiful girl'. Beauty is subjective.
 * Stop adding Magic/Spell Casting. It's redundant and all pages are formatted the same with solely Spell Casting
 * You're formatting the relationship section incorrectly. There's no shortage of character pages to sue as a blue print as to how it's done.