Thread:Killer kev/@comment-31054681-20180219211949

Finally Back ;P! So I am working on the timeline and I've noticed that the events are written according to the release of each episode, so every information provided changes as the season progresses. This creates a lot of unnecesary bullet points that explain an event. And since the timeline is going to be written in present tense, it creates a lot of confusion because then some parts that are revealed later on about that event needs to be written in past tense. An example would be:
 * The morning of July 4th, Cheryl and Jason Blossom drive out to Sweetwater River for a boat ride, during which time the boat tips, and Jason falls in and supposedly drowns.
 * Cheryl is later found on the shores of the river by Dilton Doiley and his scouts.
 * It is later revealed that Cheryl has fabricated the entire story of her brother drowning. The truth is that Jason wanted to leave Riverdale for good, and didn't want his parents to come looking for him. He and Cheryl staged the accident, so as to fake Jason's death. In actuality, Cheryl and Jason made it to the other side of the river unharmed and parted ways, which was the last time Cheryl saw or heard from her brother.

Instead of having so many bullet points surrounding one event, as the details of that specific event are revealed according to the order of the episodes, it could be rewritten according to what actually happened that day. So, even though the information may not follow the chronological order of the episodes, it will follow the original order of how the event unfolded. So an example of a rewritten version of the example above can be:
 * The morning of July 4th, Jason's plan to leave Riverdale commences as he and Cheryl drive out to Sweetwater river and take a boat ride to the other side of the river, where they part ways. Jason wants to leave Riverdale and doesn't want his parents to look for him, so they stage an accident to fake his death; the boat tips over, Jason falls into the water and supposedly drowns.
 * Cheryl is found on the shores of the river by Dilton Doiley and his scouts.

Let me know what you think 